i dont "get" poetry
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
why
why o why
wwwhhyyy-o
wwwhhyyy-o
mega fail
newest entry in a long list
crossed the line
this time, really done it
but things are only what i want them to be
gotta use the right spin
im the center of my universe: so i turn it how i like
i choose not to mind
but i still, still i but wonder why
why o why o
as time passes by,
only swirling
spinning
spiralling like a galaxy,
small parts flying away never to come back
changes, every where, explosions huge little pin pricks
chaos, tranquility, blanket of lights,
All is smashed together in the center, singular, plain and simple
black and void
The one thing I know
where did I come from?
What am I
where am I going
i don't understand
help
why o
why o
why o why
wwwhhyyy-o
wwwhhyyy-o
mega fail
newest entry in a long list
crossed the line
this time, really done it
but things are only what i want them to be
gotta use the right spin
im the center of my universe: so i turn it how i like
i choose not to mind
but i still, still i but wonder why
why o why o
as time passes by,
only swirling
spinning
spiralling like a galaxy,
small parts flying away never to come back
changes, every where, explosions huge little pin pricks
chaos, tranquility, blanket of lights,
All is smashed together in the center, singular, plain and simple
black and void
The one thing I know
where did I come from?
What am I
where am I going
i don't understand
help
why o
why o
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
Awake from the dream
asleep so long
resting for the finale
cozy within warmth of blanket.
Awaken with a smile
to say thanks again.
For life, experience and love.
For without these we are lost.
The human experience,
taken for granted.
Hijacked-enslaved!
tranformations in progress.
Although we don't see it
at night
the sun shines brightly.
Although we can't smell it,
the aroma fill's with joy.
Although we can't hear it,
it vibrates a symphony.
Fear not of Earthly distractions,
sideshows and disasters.
Keep focused on love
This is your compass,
take heed !
asleep so long
resting for the finale
cozy within warmth of blanket.
Awaken with a smile
to say thanks again.
For life, experience and love.
For without these we are lost.
The human experience,
taken for granted.
Hijacked-enslaved!
tranformations in progress.
Although we don't see it
at night
the sun shines brightly.
Although we can't smell it,
the aroma fill's with joy.
Although we can't hear it,
it vibrates a symphony.
Fear not of Earthly distractions,
sideshows and disasters.
Keep focused on love
This is your compass,
take heed !
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
I'll throw in one of my songs from my latest black metal demo. Its called "Freezing Sandwich".
Up in the freezer
Struggle to keep warm
Plotting its vengeance
For seasons to come
Freezing Sandwich
Stolen by frost
Relives the disgrace of its ancestors
Solidified mustard
Cardboard textured bread (I really want to change this line lawl)
Hopes of escape
In the coming of days
Freezing Sandwich
Deprived of warmth
Bound between the power of ice cream
To feel the sunlight
Would be a blessing
Human interference
Is the only way
Freezing Sandwich
Damned to hell
Cannot overcome the forces of frost
Up in the freezer
Struggle to keep warm
Plotting its vengeance
For seasons to come
Freezing Sandwich
Stolen by frost
Relives the disgrace of its ancestors
Solidified mustard
Cardboard textured bread (I really want to change this line lawl)
Hopes of escape
In the coming of days
Freezing Sandwich
Deprived of warmth
Bound between the power of ice cream
To feel the sunlight
Would be a blessing
Human interference
Is the only way
Freezing Sandwich
Damned to hell
Cannot overcome the forces of frost
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
If you don't like that one here is one of the songs I wrote for my next demo.
Winter is
Frozen wasteland
Grim winds blow
Icy torrents
I keep my Sandwich
In frozen snow banks
A natural ice box
Ice
I summon my woman
For a second Sandwich
Her frozen limbs tremble
As she makes fresh bread
Tomorrow will come
Another frozen day
But my woman must stay
For women make Sandwiches
My freezing Sandwich
Penetrates my flesh
The snow banks grow
Higher and higher
Winter is
Frozen wasteland
Grim winds blow
Icy torrents
I keep my Sandwich
In frozen snow banks
A natural ice box
Ice
I summon my woman
For a second Sandwich
Her frozen limbs tremble
As she makes fresh bread
Tomorrow will come
Another frozen day
But my woman must stay
For women make Sandwiches
My freezing Sandwich
Penetrates my flesh
The snow banks grow
Higher and higher
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
Ancient encrusted fossilized
frozen methane-the decay of life
a snapshot of time
freeze frame for millennia
a reminder of the powers
the powers to form this world
like a rubik's cube .
Inflict divine mercy
proportionately. RESET
frozen methane-the decay of life
a snapshot of time
freeze frame for millennia
a reminder of the powers
the powers to form this world
like a rubik's cube .
Inflict divine mercy
proportionately. RESET
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
Icy torrents? You mean those without seeds? 0.oP-51 wrote:If you don't like that one here is one of the songs I wrote for my next demo.
Winter is
Frozen wasteland
Grim winds blow
Icy torrents
You cannot make another post so soon after your last.
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
stumbling, tree-legged,
smashing, crashing
tearing, sheering, scraping, hurting harming,
altogether clumsy, discoordinated
retarded
bumping, meaning well, knocking everything over,
urgent, shameful,
completely powerless, no finesse
frustrated, suffering
anger
it was better to stay apart
collisions, equal and opposite forces
real and in spirit
causing pain for both sides
lose-lose situation
for many and one
far, far apart,
you must go
if you really do mean well
so you claim,
but it cannot be true,
can it?
eventually all is forgotten,
lonliness is fate, either way
what became, became
sleeping deep in the seas that tugg incessentaly at those who walk
whether they know it or not
Away thus, in deep, dark ocean rivers
Things colded, solidified, followed their natural course
smoothed over, jaded
burning forge sinking, settling,
more complete
how many times can you go over and over the same thing
the edges are erased, things become simpler
deeper to the true essense
even yourself is lost with-in eventually
Without warning
When then your angry eye is awaked
a sudden brief flash: there is the animal
deep-set, beast like,
deeper yet than an animal, but still of a mind
so distant that it is entirely here but gone
it can all be seen in your eye
a force of nature
O heaven protect us from the day of your return!
Godzilla!!!
smashing, crashing
tearing, sheering, scraping, hurting harming,
altogether clumsy, discoordinated
retarded
bumping, meaning well, knocking everything over,
urgent, shameful,
completely powerless, no finesse
frustrated, suffering
anger
it was better to stay apart
collisions, equal and opposite forces
real and in spirit
causing pain for both sides
lose-lose situation
for many and one
far, far apart,
you must go
if you really do mean well
so you claim,
but it cannot be true,
can it?
eventually all is forgotten,
lonliness is fate, either way
what became, became
sleeping deep in the seas that tugg incessentaly at those who walk
whether they know it or not
Away thus, in deep, dark ocean rivers
Things colded, solidified, followed their natural course
smoothed over, jaded
burning forge sinking, settling,
more complete
how many times can you go over and over the same thing
the edges are erased, things become simpler
deeper to the true essense
even yourself is lost with-in eventually
Without warning
When then your angry eye is awaked
a sudden brief flash: there is the animal
deep-set, beast like,
deeper yet than an animal, but still of a mind
so distant that it is entirely here but gone
it can all be seen in your eye
a force of nature
O heaven protect us from the day of your return!
Godzilla!!!
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
Nah mang I was thinking more along the lines of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTA38kj4 ... re=related.lightnessking wrote:
Icy torrents? You mean those without seeds? 0.o
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
Red are the hours, tall are the towers
Malice and dour faces they're all around me. They're All around me.
As I choke on holy smoke I get the joke and see we've broken down.
And I Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
It's just killing time.
Nothing but truth, nothing but love
Smell the fuse and nothing is blown to nothing. Blown to nothing.
And I scream at the whore on the floor, "You were born to be more!"
Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
It's just killing time. Yeah, you know how it is.
Oh how I wish we could lay down our arms for a while.
God how I wish we could lay down our arms for a while.
Just for a while.
Red are the hours, tall are the towers
Malice and dour faces are all around me. All around me.
And I scream at the whore on the floor, "You were born to be more!"
Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
Now it's killing time!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pj-HBrlDjnM
Malice and dour faces they're all around me. They're All around me.
As I choke on holy smoke I get the joke and see we've broken down.
And I Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
It's just killing time.
Nothing but truth, nothing but love
Smell the fuse and nothing is blown to nothing. Blown to nothing.
And I scream at the whore on the floor, "You were born to be more!"
Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
It's just killing time. Yeah, you know how it is.
Oh how I wish we could lay down our arms for a while.
God how I wish we could lay down our arms for a while.
Just for a while.
Red are the hours, tall are the towers
Malice and dour faces are all around me. All around me.
And I scream at the whore on the floor, "You were born to be more!"
Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
Now it's killing time!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pj-HBrlDjnM
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This is one of my favorite bands of all time, and some of the best lyrics I've ever heard. I don't know how he can sing this shit, epic tongue-twister.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZ8nkl9tvBw
Bedroom mirrors do tell who's the fairest of them all
Lime light silhouette, transparent walls
Dancing shadows cascade paper dolls
Wailing ghost guitars send in the clowns
Send in the clowns
Painted plastic faces stealing mommies make up
Masque the false gods with mannequin smiles
Prima donnas play upon their pedestals of fame
Unborn girls the false facade illegitimate child
I won't play your game
Illegitimate child searching for a name
Blasphemous black Bible bias you betray bigotry
Slay the hydra pretty fair maidens spread their leprosy
Hungry children feed from hype of perpetual ego's
Slay the hydra, burn the talisman, holocaust
Run with the pack illegitimate child the unborn wench at war.
Tears in his eyes she became a bride wedlock to a whore.
Shatter the dream the tangerine dream bow to kings not the queens.
Go back where you reign to your domain the Valley of the Dolls!
Bow to kings of yesterday they have given you wings to fly away.
What have the phantom queens but deceived you
Armies of shadows climbing silvery mountains lining molten and ask
Camouflage the battle scars with Oxy Ten and Maybelline
Cloning the heroes in hype magazines
Pirates of underground lighting the speed of sound.
You will prevail.
And bedroom mirrors do tell who's the fairest of them all
Lime light silhouette transparent walls
Dancing shadows cascade paper dolls
Wailing ghost guitars
Run with the pack illegitimate child the unborn wench at war.
Tears in his eyes she became a bride wedlock to a whore.
Shatter the dream the tangerine dream bow to kings not the queens.
Go back where you reign to your domain the Valley of the Dolls!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZ8nkl9tvBw
Bedroom mirrors do tell who's the fairest of them all
Lime light silhouette, transparent walls
Dancing shadows cascade paper dolls
Wailing ghost guitars send in the clowns
Send in the clowns
Painted plastic faces stealing mommies make up
Masque the false gods with mannequin smiles
Prima donnas play upon their pedestals of fame
Unborn girls the false facade illegitimate child
I won't play your game
Illegitimate child searching for a name
Blasphemous black Bible bias you betray bigotry
Slay the hydra pretty fair maidens spread their leprosy
Hungry children feed from hype of perpetual ego's
Slay the hydra, burn the talisman, holocaust
Run with the pack illegitimate child the unborn wench at war.
Tears in his eyes she became a bride wedlock to a whore.
Shatter the dream the tangerine dream bow to kings not the queens.
Go back where you reign to your domain the Valley of the Dolls!
Bow to kings of yesterday they have given you wings to fly away.
What have the phantom queens but deceived you
Armies of shadows climbing silvery mountains lining molten and ask
Camouflage the battle scars with Oxy Ten and Maybelline
Cloning the heroes in hype magazines
Pirates of underground lighting the speed of sound.
You will prevail.
And bedroom mirrors do tell who's the fairest of them all
Lime light silhouette transparent walls
Dancing shadows cascade paper dolls
Wailing ghost guitars
Run with the pack illegitimate child the unborn wench at war.
Tears in his eyes she became a bride wedlock to a whore.
Shatter the dream the tangerine dream bow to kings not the queens.
Go back where you reign to your domain the Valley of the Dolls!
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
It's all coming together now,
starting to make sense.
Why the underground cities
and why they built the fence !
Allways guessing
Nukes ? Comet's ?
WAR ? Plague ?
Run to the Hague -
and beg ! spare my life
and my wife's-
It's now raining nuclear snow.
no where to go, no where to hide.
Better stay inside ?
How to fend the nuclear rain ?
will we feel pain ?
or will this need some time to set in ?
GET IN, don't breath the air.
beware----oh beware
RED ARE THE HOURS< TALL ARE THE TOWERS.
Malice and dour faces they're all around me.
starting to make sense.
Why the underground cities
and why they built the fence !
Allways guessing
Nukes ? Comet's ?
WAR ? Plague ?
Run to the Hague -
and beg ! spare my life
and my wife's-
It's now raining nuclear snow.
no where to go, no where to hide.
Better stay inside ?
How to fend the nuclear rain ?
will we feel pain ?
or will this need some time to set in ?
GET IN, don't breath the air.
beware----oh beware
RED ARE THE HOURS< TALL ARE THE TOWERS.
Malice and dour faces they're all around me.
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Re: i dont "get" poetry
Bastions from Hell stand and be counted.
Your deeds bleed rivers of sorrow.
The unatural aroma of your existence
wafts plumes of putrid hate.
To dam the flow of love,
creating a void an abyss.
Shunning morals and logic,
blinded by black forces.
45 th cycle of 3600 years has arrived.
Returning the logic back to sanity.
Reversing the ominous cursed blackness.
To the truest form of light.
So happily i go about the day's
knowing that whatever ill concieved chaos
is mustered within the darkness can no longer
have effect. Fear is gone, lost forever.
Live as we were meant to llive.
Be who we were meant to be.
Your deeds bleed rivers of sorrow.
The unatural aroma of your existence
wafts plumes of putrid hate.
To dam the flow of love,
creating a void an abyss.
Shunning morals and logic,
blinded by black forces.
45 th cycle of 3600 years has arrived.
Returning the logic back to sanity.
Reversing the ominous cursed blackness.
To the truest form of light.
So happily i go about the day's
knowing that whatever ill concieved chaos
is mustered within the darkness can no longer
have effect. Fear is gone, lost forever.
Live as we were meant to llive.
Be who we were meant to be.
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Reflections
-Fraktardo 2011
Ruminating on things past
It gives pause to wonder, what was meant.
For man craves meaning,
just as a beast craves food and water that it might live,
man searches for something which to live for.
Who will remember?
Who will recall the great deeds
of heroes who were here, then gone
what is the difference now between what was
and what never will be,
for neither exist anywhere but imagined space
Such is the fruit of science,
or of staring at columnous clouds
rolling by
-Fraktardo 2011
Ruminating on things past
It gives pause to wonder, what was meant.
For man craves meaning,
just as a beast craves food and water that it might live,
man searches for something which to live for.
Who will remember?
Who will recall the great deeds
of heroes who were here, then gone
what is the difference now between what was
and what never will be,
for neither exist anywhere but imagined space
Such is the fruit of science,
or of staring at columnous clouds
rolling by
Last edited by Fraktardo on Thu Jun 16, 2011 2:49 am, edited 1 time in total.
"fortune favors the butt pickers"
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Spring Time Poem
-Fraktardo 2011
A petal fell softly past my face
and reminded me to breeze a sigh
fresh clear air,
clear likes tears
cherry blossom, where are you now?
-Fraktardo 2011
A petal fell softly past my face
and reminded me to breeze a sigh
fresh clear air,
clear likes tears
cherry blossom, where are you now?
"fortune favors the butt pickers"
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Are Eliens real?
-A question by me, 6/27/2011
Dear diary is there an aelien, and also is that for real?
i would like to know whether does aeliens esxcist or not,
dear yahoo answers do you have the answer
why or why not
please explain
How many times doe the leaves drop off a tree before a tree is a grass
and a grass is a seagull
questions to ponder,
but answers: do they live?
Or are they only the death of a question?
-ym
-A question by me, 6/27/2011
Dear diary is there an aelien, and also is that for real?
i would like to know whether does aeliens esxcist or not,
dear yahoo answers do you have the answer
why or why not
please explain
How many times doe the leaves drop off a tree before a tree is a grass
and a grass is a seagull
questions to ponder,
but answers: do they live?
Or are they only the death of a question?
-ym
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