i dont "get" poetry

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why

why o why

wwwhhyyy-o

wwwhhyyy-o

mega fail

newest entry in a long list

crossed the line

this time, really done it

but things are only what i want them to be

gotta use the right spin

im the center of my universe: so i turn it how i like

i choose not to mind


but i still, still i but wonder why

why o why o

as time passes by,

only swirling

spinning

spiralling like a galaxy,

small parts flying away never to come back

changes, every where, explosions huge little pin pricks

chaos, tranquility, blanket of lights,

All is smashed together in the center, singular, plain and simple
black and void
The one thing I know

where did I come from?

What am I

where am I going

i don't understand

help

why o

why o
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Awake from the dream
asleep so long
resting for the finale
cozy within warmth of blanket.

Awaken with a smile
to say thanks again.
For life, experience and love.
For without these we are lost.

The human experience,
taken for granted.
Hijacked-enslaved!
tranformations in progress.

Although we don't see it
at night
the sun shines brightly.
Although we can't smell it,
the aroma fill's with joy.
Although we can't hear it,
it vibrates a symphony.

Fear not of Earthly distractions,
sideshows and disasters.
Keep focused on love
This is your compass,
take heed !
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I'll throw in one of my songs from my latest black metal demo. Its called "Freezing Sandwich".

Up in the freezer
Struggle to keep warm
Plotting its vengeance
For seasons to come
Freezing Sandwich
Stolen by frost
Relives the disgrace of its ancestors

Solidified mustard
Cardboard textured bread (I really want to change this line lawl)
Hopes of escape
In the coming of days
Freezing Sandwich
Deprived of warmth
Bound between the power of ice cream

To feel the sunlight
Would be a blessing
Human interference
Is the only way
Freezing Sandwich
Damned to hell
Cannot overcome the forces of frost

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If you don't like that one here is one of the songs I wrote for my next demo.

Winter is
Frozen wasteland
Grim winds blow
Icy torrents

I keep my Sandwich
In frozen snow banks
A natural ice box
Ice

I summon my woman
For a second Sandwich
Her frozen limbs tremble
As she makes fresh bread

Tomorrow will come
Another frozen day
But my woman must stay
For women make Sandwiches

My freezing Sandwich
Penetrates my flesh
The snow banks grow
Higher and higher

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Ancient encrusted fossilized
frozen methane-the decay of life
a snapshot of time
freeze frame for millennia
a reminder of the powers
the powers to form this world
like a rubik's cube .
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Inflict divine mercy
proportionately. RESET
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P-51 wrote:If you don't like that one here is one of the songs I wrote for my next demo.

Winter is
Frozen wasteland
Grim winds blow
Icy torrents
Icy torrents? You mean those without seeds? 0.o
You cannot make another post so soon after your last.

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stumbling, tree-legged,
smashing, crashing
tearing, sheering, scraping, hurting harming,
altogether clumsy, discoordinated
retarded
bumping, meaning well, knocking everything over,
urgent, shameful,
completely powerless, no finesse
frustrated, suffering
anger

it was better to stay apart
collisions, equal and opposite forces
real and in spirit
causing pain for both sides
lose-lose situation
for many and one

far, far apart,
you must go
if you really do mean well
so you claim,
but it cannot be true,
can it?
eventually all is forgotten,
lonliness is fate, either way
what became, became
sleeping deep in the seas that tugg incessentaly at those who walk
whether they know it or not

Away thus, in deep, dark ocean rivers
Things colded, solidified, followed their natural course
smoothed over, jaded
burning forge sinking, settling,
more complete
how many times can you go over and over the same thing
the edges are erased, things become simpler
deeper to the true essense
even yourself is lost with-in eventually

Without warning
When then your angry eye is awaked
a sudden brief flash: there is the animal
deep-set, beast like,
deeper yet than an animal, but still of a mind
so distant that it is entirely here but gone

it can all be seen in your eye
a force of nature

O heaven protect us from the day of your return!

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lightnessking wrote:
Icy torrents? You mean those without seeds? 0.o
Nah mang I was thinking more along the lines of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTA38kj4 ... re=related.

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Red are the hours, tall are the towers
Malice and dour faces they're all around me. They're All around me.

As I choke on holy smoke I get the joke and see we've broken down.

And I Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.

It's just killing time.

Nothing but truth, nothing but love
Smell the fuse and nothing is blown to nothing. Blown to nothing.

And I scream at the whore on the floor, "You were born to be more!"

Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.
It's just killing time. Yeah, you know how it is.

Oh how I wish we could lay down our arms for a while.
God how I wish we could lay down our arms for a while.
Just for a while.

Red are the hours, tall are the towers
Malice and dour faces are all around me. All around me.
And I scream at the whore on the floor, "You were born to be more!"

Watch as you take what's mine. I let you take what's mine.

Now it's killing time!!!

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This is one of my favorite bands of all time, and some of the best lyrics I've ever heard. I don't know how he can sing this shit, epic tongue-twister.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZ8nkl9tvBw

Bedroom mirrors do tell who's the fairest of them all
Lime light silhouette, transparent walls
Dancing shadows cascade paper dolls
Wailing ghost guitars send in the clowns
Send in the clowns

Painted plastic faces stealing mommies make up
Masque the false gods with mannequin smiles
Prima donnas play upon their pedestals of fame
Unborn girls the false facade illegitimate child

I won't play your game
Illegitimate child searching for a name

Blasphemous black Bible bias you betray bigotry
Slay the hydra pretty fair maidens spread their leprosy
Hungry children feed from hype of perpetual ego's
Slay the hydra, burn the talisman, holocaust

Run with the pack illegitimate child the unborn wench at war.
Tears in his eyes she became a bride wedlock to a whore.
Shatter the dream the tangerine dream bow to kings not the queens.
Go back where you reign to your domain the Valley of the Dolls!

Bow to kings of yesterday they have given you wings to fly away.
What have the phantom queens but deceived you
Armies of shadows climbing silvery mountains lining molten and ask
Camouflage the battle scars with Oxy Ten and Maybelline
Cloning the heroes in hype magazines
Pirates of underground lighting the speed of sound.
You will prevail.

And bedroom mirrors do tell who's the fairest of them all
Lime light silhouette transparent walls
Dancing shadows cascade paper dolls
Wailing ghost guitars

Run with the pack illegitimate child the unborn wench at war.
Tears in his eyes she became a bride wedlock to a whore.
Shatter the dream the tangerine dream bow to kings not the queens.
Go back where you reign to your domain the Valley of the Dolls!

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It's all coming together now,
starting to make sense.
Why the underground cities
and why they built the fence !

Allways guessing
Nukes ? Comet's ?
WAR ? Plague ?
Run to the Hague -
and beg ! spare my life
and my wife's-

It's now raining nuclear snow.
no where to go, no where to hide.
Better stay inside ?
How to fend the nuclear rain ?
will we feel pain ?
or will this need some time to set in ?
GET IN, don't breath the air.
beware----oh beware

RED ARE THE HOURS< TALL ARE THE TOWERS.
Malice and dour faces they're all around me.
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Bastions from Hell stand and be counted.
Your deeds bleed rivers of sorrow.
The unatural aroma of your existence
wafts plumes of putrid hate.

To dam the flow of love,
creating a void an abyss.
Shunning morals and logic,
blinded by black forces.

45 th cycle of 3600 years has arrived.
Returning the logic back to sanity.
Reversing the ominous cursed blackness.
To the truest form of light.

So happily i go about the day's
knowing that whatever ill concieved chaos
is mustered within the darkness can no longer
have effect. Fear is gone, lost forever.
Live as we were meant to llive.
Be who we were meant to be.
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Reflections
-Fraktardo 2011


Ruminating on things past

It gives pause to wonder, what was meant.

For man craves meaning,

just as a beast craves food and water that it might live,

man searches for something which to live for.


Who will remember?

Who will recall the great deeds

of heroes who were here, then gone

what is the difference now between what was

and what never will be,

for neither exist anywhere but imagined space


Such is the fruit of science,
or of staring at columnous clouds
rolling by
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Spring Time Poem
-Fraktardo 2011


A petal fell softly past my face

and reminded me to breeze a sigh

fresh clear air,

clear likes tears


cherry blossom, where are you now?
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Are Eliens real?
-A question by me, 6/27/2011

Dear diary is there an aelien, and also is that for real?

i would like to know whether does aeliens esxcist or not,

dear yahoo answers do you have the answer

why or why not

please explain

How many times doe the leaves drop off a tree before a tree is a grass

and a grass is a seagull

questions to ponder,

but answers: do they live?

Or are they only the death of a question?

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